My friend on the left is Paulo Henrique. He is 13 years old and he live with the family. He is student and your favorite subject phisical education. In the your free time he plays basketball with your best favorite Adriano and he also like of to play in the computer. Chinese food is favorite his .
Hi Annielle,
ReplyDeleteonly a few points to consider:
he liveS with HIS family
He is A student and HIS favorite subject IS phYsical education.
In HIS free time...
...with HIS best friend Adriano
...also likeS to play ON the computer.
Chinese food is his favorite
It's a detail, as you wrote about Paulo, the correct determiner to use is 'his'. You use 'you' if you're writing directly to the person, an that's not the case.
Overall, very good text. Congrats!