Friday 25 March 2011
Bruna Magnata
My name is Bruna Magnata, i'm sixteen years old. I live in brazil. I born in Recife. I'm studing in high school Madre de Deus. When i was younger i studied in high school Visão. I'd like Jorge and Mateus' musics cause that speak about the love. I'm romantic. Sometimes, I try to sing this musics, but i have a bad voice. My brothers say they don't like listen to me singing.
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Hi Bruna, I made a few corrections on your text:
ReplyDeleteI WAS born
I (no 'd) like Jorge and Mateus) SONGS BEcause THEY speak
I try to sing this SONGS (music is more general, like rock music, pop music...Songs are more specific, as in 'Firework' by Katy Perry.
they don't like TO listen...
This is a very good text, well done, only a few details to work on, congratulations.