The purpose of this blog is to promote interaction and fun throughout the semester for Britanic Elementary Students. Here we’ll post our written tasks and get to know people from other Elementary groups. Feel free to write whenever you want and share interesting material. Hope you have fun with your Key Pals.
Friday 25 March 2011
Lucas montenegro
she name is july she lives in recife your age 12 years study in grande passo your job is vagabundo she favorite food is pizza she favorite color is purple
Hi Lucas, a few suggestions: HER name is July It's easier to say 'She is 12 years old'! SHE studIES at Grande Passo HER job (is vagabundo a job??) HER favorite food... HER favorite color...
Try to review possessive determiners (my/your/his/her/its/your/our/their). And how can you improve these senteces? Can you write a text, instead of seperate sentences?
Hi Lucas, a few suggestions:
ReplyDeleteHER name is July
It's easier to say 'She is 12 years old'!
SHE studIES at Grande Passo
HER job (is vagabundo a job??)
HER favorite food...
HER favorite color...
Try to review possessive determiners (my/your/his/her/its/your/our/their).
And how can you improve these senteces? Can you write a text, instead of seperate sentences?