The purpose of this blog is to promote interaction and fun throughout the semester for Britanic Elementary Students. Here we’ll post our written tasks and get to know people from other Elementary groups. Feel free to write whenever you want and share interesting material. Hope you have fun with your Key Pals.
Friday, 25 March 2011
Tassio's life
His name is Thassio, have 13 years old, lives in Recife,Brazil.He's student and study in colegio Boa Viagem,likes eat pizza and see a lot of movies and in his free time he sleep a lot.
Hi Maria, here's some feedback on your writing: HE IS 13 years old HE lives ... He's A student HE studIES seeS sleepS
Maria, your text is good, but you need to pay attention to the third person and the verb (he/she/it requires -s, -es or -ies when you use Simple Present)
Hi Maria, here's some feedback on your writing:
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HE lives ...
He's A student
HE studIES
seeS
sleepS
Maria, your text is good, but you need to pay attention to the third person and the verb (he/she/it requires -s, -es or -ies when you use Simple Present)
Just a correction, I thought you were Maria, then I saw you are Clara, so now I'm calling you by the usual name, Clara it is :)
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